高考英语写作之主题句

读写任务之学会写段落主题句

评分标准及解题要求

概括（5分）概括全面，表述清晰

写作内容（20分）:主题明确,紧扣三个要点

五年来读写任务的写作内容2都是三个要点, 三个要点最好依次用三个段落来写, 每个段落前最好用一个主题句, 这样做既不会漏掉要点, 又层次清楚, 能让阅卷老师一目了然。

段落的主题句其实就是一句过渡的话, 用来表达观点(赞成或反对)或引出类似的经历，使上下文衔接得更加紧密。

主题句的模式： ＊引出经历 ＊重述要点 ＊回答要点 ＊明示观点

＊引出方法、建议、措施、步骤等

一、引出经历

1. 时间、地点和起因。【讲述一次想家的经历】（11广东）

Like Sam, each of us may ___________________missing our family, _____________(包括我在内).

2. 你或你同学的做兼职的经历。

This an unforgettable experience of my part-time job. I once ____________________________________ . 3. 上文使你想起哪位对你帮助最大的老师（2012年广东高考）

After reading this story，it suddenly my respectable teacher Miss Wang，an English teacher who always carries a big smile on her face.

二、重述要点

这类主题句并不直接回答要点的提问，而是翻译要点作为段落的主题句，例如，要点是“谈谈……的重要性” ，主题句则为“……有重要作用”，要点是“谈谈……有何重要意义”，主题句可直接说“……很有意义”等。 1. 同学们对周末补课的不同看法。（11清远一模）

Students _______________________________ on taking classes at weekends. 2. 在生活中谅解他人有何意义?

From the story I learn that understanding and forgiving others _______________________in our life.

3. 掌握急救知识的重要性

As far as I’m concerned, for us to know some knowledge about first aid.

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4. 你怎样看待老师对学生的影响。（2012年广东高考）

(事实上), the teachers （起着非常重要的作用）the study and life of the students, when he or she is growing up from a kid to a polite, thoughtful and responsible person.

三、回答要点

写作要点是询问考生的看法时，用对提问作出明确回答的句子作为主题句。 1. 你愿意与人分享吗？

Personally, _______________ to share with others.

2. 假设你当时就在事故现场，你是伸出援助之手还是袖手旁观？

If I to be present at the scene, I to his help and sent him to the nearest hospital or dial 120 for help.

3. 吴菊萍挽救了一个从10楼掉下来的2岁女婴后被称为“最美妈妈”，请谈谈你对此感受。 , I by Wu Juping who saved the two-year old baby.

四、明示观点

明确表示对某观点支持、赞同或反对、不赞同。 1.你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法。（ 10广东）

As far as I am concerned, ____________________ the measure of paying students to study.

或者 (我不支持) encouraging kids with cash just they have got good marks.

2.你对中学生博客的态度。(11广州调研） As for myself, I ________ student-blogging. 3.你是否赞成推迟高中早上的上课时间。（ 10佛山一模）

In my view, _________________with the idea to delay the opening of the school day of Senior School.

五、引出建议、方法、措施、步骤等

1. 说说人们对环境保护所采取的措施：

Luckily, more and more measures to protect the environment. 2. 你认为应该如何应付考试紧张？

Several effective methods can the problem of feeling nervous in exams.

Practice：

task1

请根据各个写作要点，写出各段的主题句

以约120个词就“该不该禁止游客和动物拍照”进行议论，内容包括：（09广东） (1)人们在参观动物园时为什么喜欢和动物拍照； (2)假如你处在那些动物的处境，你会有什么反应； (3)你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照。

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Task 2 请根据各个写作要点，写出各段的主题句 以约120个词就“熄灯一小时”活动发表看法， 包括如下要点：(2011年深圳二模） 1）你是否赞成这种做法并说明理由；

2）你是否动员你的家人或你周围的人参加此活动？ 3）日常生活中为了保护环境我们还可以做些什么？

Keys: 一、1.have the experience of me included 2.reminds me of had an experience of doing a part-time job in a summer vocation. 3.reminds me of 4.have their own different opinions

二、1．have their own different opinions 2.plays an important role 3.it’s of great significance 4. As a matter of fact play an extremely important role in

三、1.I am willing 2.had happened would have come 3. After reading the story was absolutely touched

四、1.I am strongly against I am not in favor of because 2.support 3.I can’t agree more

五、1.are being taken 2.be used to solve

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Task1

1.The reasons why tourists like taking photos of the animals in the zoo perhaps vary from people to people.

2.If I were the animal in the zoo, I would certainly feel annoyed and disturbed by the visitors’ photographing.

3.I think it necessary to ban tourists’ taking pictures with animals. Task2

1.I am strongly for this activity, which is really meaningful and helpful for preventing our earth from getting warmer.

2.As for me, I will tell my family and people around about Earth Hour and try to ask them to join in it.

3.As high school students, we are supposed to make great efforts to help protect our environment.

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